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The voices and the animation were superb! They totally replicated the Spongebob characters perfectly while still keeping true to the Watchmen story and atmosphere. A great blend of the two, and very funny seeing Spongebob as Rorschach! Great work man!

Very minimal movement from the characters, and the mouths barely opened. This was labeled as a "Comedy" but their was no distinguishable joke or humor, it was very short in fact too short, wheres the setup, wheres the punchline? The characters were nicely designed and drawn, presented well however the colors were very bland. I wanna know why you made this.

Nice rhymes, very charming. Art was also good, I could see your style in it. However a lot of the parts could've used a bit more work, you used a lot of google images when you needed an object which isn't too bad but you could see the picture wasn't cropped decreasing its quality, learn to crop next time you use google images to put your your animations. The background for the most part was empty and dull. Still good work, keep it up, and try using colors more.

mingylad responds:

Thanks Man
I Understand Where You are coming from 100 %
Thing is I needed to rush this for School
But thanks For Commenting.

I enjoyed the art style very simple yet clean and served the purpose. But the joke was stale and wasn't executed effectively. More extreame faces could've made it funnier, and instead of a whole duck on her head maybe her head turned into an ugly duck. I don't wanna sound like I'm telling you what to do, and everyone has their own way of doing things. But I felt like this was weak when it could've been better.

Animoumou responds:

Thank you for the critique. This was my first animation so I can use all the advice possible. I'll work on it.

I loved the character designs and animation it was all very nicely presented and very appealing to look at. It was funny and had me chuckeling here and their. Very charming and humorous. The voice acting was good but I don't think the voices quite suited the characters, like the big damsel kidnapping bad guy didn't quite have the ruff manly voice I would've expected but rather a lighter less intimidating voice. And the microphone quality wasn't the best. However still very glad I viewed it, again very funny with some great animation.

Brewster responds:

The dissonance between the designs and the voices was intentional, hopefully its not too distracting. Thanks for thanks

Did you submit the wrong file, like is this a very early backup because what I'm seeing is an unfinished confusion to the eyes. Everything (except the kid) is grey which I pressume you were trying to recreate the old gameboy feel but everything is the same shade of grey with no depth, shading or even clear fills all the colors are just scribbled on. And the only fleshed out colored in character is the kid who sticks out like a soar thumb due to this and doesn't even move. There's a skeleton of the kid animated in it's key frames which looked good behind the actual character who just sorta stands still. Not doing anything but this single pose. I'll have to admit I got a kick out of the joke, it's a joke everyone has made but the way the voltorb just turned over was amusing and the kids reaction was satisfying. But again it was executed horribly, as it hasn't been executed because what I just saw wasn't an animation but was an animatic (especially with everything labeled) which could result in a decent animation, it's unfinished and I REALLY hope you actually did finish it and just uploaded the wrong file with the kid animated...sorta like what you get in an animation.

LitPower responds:

I'd like to point you to the "Authors comments" section right below the video, I used to be an animator and I quit, and this was an unfinished animation as stated in the description below the video, I just thought I'd upload it regardless since I did work on this for about a couple weeks and thought why not, I apologise it didn't meet your animating standards but I have no intention in finishing this animation as I retired from animation over a year ago, so hope that's cleared things up and try reading the description next time before taking the time to comment lol, have a nice day! :)

I get the punchline but don't think it was executed very well. The humor just wasn't there for me. The movement was very dodgy and didn't flow well. The audio was awful, get a better microphone! The backgrounds were alright and were well designed. However when their was a close up on the guy's face the background was one boring solid color. Keep at it.

drainzerhg responds:

the audio was a coverting error from the program and the blured background its because i made the back really fast and it look ugly, any way i made it all by myself, but thanks for your review

Wow! This is amazing, the whole thing oozes with charm. When the sandwich and drink float in the air it really looked like they were floating in space. Very funny! Keep up the good work, I'd love to see more from you! :D

Bi-Polar-Bear responds:

Thanks Justalp! Really appreciate the positive feedback. There's definitely more like this on the way, you should follow me on Facebook or something :)

Nice cartoon, the punchline was funny in an ironic sort of way and the kids voice cracked me up at the end. But the two main kids look too similar even their color palets were very close. The voice for the old man bothered me as it was obviously the same person. And their was little to no movement. But overall nice little cartoon. Keep it up.

Cool video man, it's very funny with alot of charm. It also goes by the funny coz it's true notion and you represented how the media veiws female characters in a very silly yet true way. The lines could've been smoother besides that it's awesome, love to see more soon! :)

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