Justalp's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Poké Poop]

I get this is your first cartoon, so here's some stuff you could work on. Everything looks like it was drawn once without any thought. If you didn't have any construction lines when animating, have very rough animated images and clean it up on top, but for your first cartoon, the movements seem to be getting there. Include a background, doesn't have to be the most detailed and best looking, just something to let us know where the characters are, it brings it more to life. The audio wasn't very pleasent. And have a story! This just seemed like random pokemon nonsense, misty says something then gets shot and stabbed...kay!? uumm...how is that a spin on pokemon, how is that a joke? I don't want you to be discouraged by this, but try and learn from other cartoons, learn the basics and maybe you can have your own Disneyland, but with your name instead.

[Techno Pond]

This was awesome! Very visually nice to look at, with a catchy tune. Every frog looked like the sound they were doing.

[Callapitter Sill]

That sure is a giddy catepillar. Uuumm...I usually don't feel like speed paints belong on newgrounds, but I don't mind them most of the time because their usually of something that's really well drawn for isntance when shadman uploads his speedpaints here (not like he can put that shizz on youtube) but this wasn't even that great of a drawing. Now I get this was suppose to be a tutorial of how to draw this catepillar, but without that knowledge I'd say this was a speedpaint of a mediocre looking catepillar. If you want to make this a tutorial explain to us what your doing, speech or at least put some text on the screen.

ToonymanStudios responds:

This is not a Tutorial or a Speed Drawing/Painting that comes later on another Series, These Episodes are an Introduction to the How to Draw Show and Tells Series. Also youtube is not really the best place for Art Stuff like this, it just not a proper place. Newgrounds however is a perfect place.

Read My post for more info http://toonymanstudios.newgrounds.com/news/post/921805.

[One Punch Man FA]

Your drawings are great and feel very remenisant to anime or manga. The animation could be used more, close to a lot of animes you mostly used a lot of still images, but the action-y parts were well done. One thing that I got sick of fast were the constant cuts to black, the first couple times it set a good tension, felt like the villain was more of a threat, but near the end it really didn't feel nessecary.

[Støv - «Rives»]

Tear to my eye, boner to my dick! Loved it!

[Pikachu, Get In The Ball.]

This was funny as balls! Voice acting and animation were well done, the mic kinda sucked but money don't grow on trees. The art style was also very appealing and humorous.

[The New Pokerap!]

Your drawings are great and were pretty creative and unique. But your facial expressions and lip synching could use a bit of work. When the character is angry, you gave him a smile, takes you out of the scene.

Gollomor responds:

Hi, thx for your feedback, I will work on that, English is not my Main Language so please forgive me :D

[Little Mac's Legacy]

Haha! It's funny because it's true!

[poke a man x and why]

Most parts were half-assed, but it made me laugh, which is something I thought I forgot to do. ...5...yeah 5, take it and leave before anyone catches you with it!

[Newgrounds vs Deviantart]

I appriciate the idea, and the whole deviant art side was humoursly represented. But the drawings and animation could be a lot better. Try sketching out your posistions before animating them head on, and smooth out your lines. Work at it bro!