Justalp's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pokemon Golder Part 2]

Money and bitches, why people do anything. Great animation, hilarious! Can't wait to see the next part! :D

mattyburrito responds:

Thanks man!

[Old Lady Needs A Pickle]

If only she got that pickle, a lot of extra animation that made it more fluid. Great job!

GreyBertMonkey responds:

Thank you, that's what I find the most fun

[busser moment - sam]

Uuumm...okey...this is pretty lame. I can forgive the lack of animation if the things they were saying were humorous or interesting...but they weren't, I get humour is different from person to person but their wasn't any build up or punchline, it was just booooooring conversations.

The lack of a background didn't help either. Just a simple background to let us know where they are would've given it some much needed depth. If you don't know what a vcam is, look into it, you don't always need the camera to show all three of them all the time.

At the end, when the two motion tweened to the middle the black guy kept doing a thing with his hand, look how a real person does it and compare. The hand movement should not be that fast nor go on for that long.

Lastly, really long pauses between speeches, try cutting out the fat in audio in audacity or something because ya know...long boring pauses make your animation booooooooooring.

Anyway, your drawings weren't all that bad, just keep working on it and keep at it bro.

chintankwa responds:

Thanks for the feed back, greatly noted.

[Callapitter Sill]

That sure is a giddy catepillar. Uuumm...I usually don't feel like speed paints belong on newgrounds, but I don't mind them most of the time because their usually of something that's really well drawn for isntance when shadman uploads his speedpaints here (not like he can put that shizz on youtube) but this wasn't even that great of a drawing. Now I get this was suppose to be a tutorial of how to draw this catepillar, but without that knowledge I'd say this was a speedpaint of a mediocre looking catepillar. If you want to make this a tutorial explain to us what your doing, speech or at least put some text on the screen.

ToonymanStudios responds:

This is not a Tutorial or a Speed Drawing/Painting that comes later on another Series, These Episodes are an Introduction to the How to Draw Show and Tells Series. Also youtube is not really the best place for Art Stuff like this, it just not a proper place. Newgrounds however is a perfect place.

Read My post for more info http://toonymanstudios.newgrounds.com/news/post/921805.

[The New Pokerap!]

Your drawings are great and were pretty creative and unique. But your facial expressions and lip synching could use a bit of work. When the character is angry, you gave him a smile, takes you out of the scene.

Gollomor responds:

Hi, thx for your feedback, I will work on that, English is not my Main Language so please forgive me :D

[Fall From Grace (Eps 2)]

Whoo! Loved it just as much as the last one. Story's interesting yet entertaining. The animation is also really well done! Great!

ChadTheDJ responds:

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it,

[Tennis with Martin]

Inspiring...I think. This was very charming and your determination was very entertaining to watch. The regular animations of the characters were okay but the animation on them playing tennis was amazing! The movements were very lifelike and the camera movements kept it pumped full of energy. And don't worry, you'll beat him someday, just don't beat him to death before that!

ActiveObjectX responds:

Yeah, when I started the video I wasn't going to animate us playing tennis as intensely. But around midway through animating the video I did some tests where I animated some fluid motions. I thought they looked good so I decided to show us playing more even though this new fluid animation clashed with my original cartoon animation/look.

["Madness"]

YOur art, shading and key frames are good. But there's a lot of dead space in the cartoon and the vcam jumps around a lot and gets disorienting. Try making your vcam movements smoother as well as your characters movements need inbetweens. But keep it up dude, it was funny!

SKillustration responds:

Thanks so much. I'll def keep this in mind for the next one. Vcam is a bit tricky fr me.

[Let the Games Begin!]

I WANT TO SEE MORE! The animation and colors are all really good but can be improved upon, given practise, but no faults here. It's funny and was a great idea to make a series on the hunger game, games on minecraft. I'm invested now man, you gotta show me more, I need my fix!

ChadTheDJ responds:

Thank you for your review! Yes more will come soon.

[A Snowman Who Gives Back]

This was cute. The movements could be more fluid but the overall atmosphere was charming. Try to distinguish the characters because I had to watch it twice just to understand the guy that hugged the snowman was a different guy to the guy that got his present taken away coz ya know...why would he hug him then. Like give one a hat or something. But overall it was good. Keep at it. :)

GingerPale responds:

Thank you :) And i will try to do these things better next time :)