Justalp's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Putting The Master Sword.]

Amazing! The colors and lights look so lively. The illustrations are so bold. The whole thing feels so epic! Wish it went on for longer. Make more stuff!

Shollis responds:

glad to read comments like this, makes the effort and time invested worthwhile.

[Pokemon don't want Pikach]

The lines were very rough and sketched out, it would've helped the look if you went over it to clean it up. The animation was good, nothing that stood out but it served its purpose well. Nice idea, but I had to read the description to actually understand the joke so my advice is try and tell the story to the viewer better, especially with animations that have no speech in them use the animation to explain to the viewer, if you're not sure ask someone to look at it and ask weather they got the premise. The resolution wasn't set right so I could see the white spaces of the frame which was distracting. The art was good and was almost exactly the way the Pokemon look on the show so good job. The sound for Pickachu's call was repetitive for it was used very often the same ones, try to find more samples to avoid this next time. Keep it up. :)

anim8bit responds:

thanks for your feedback! it's very helpeful :)... yea the pikachu call was hard to find without music and that was the clearest version i could find lol wish there was a resource for that kind of stuff!

[Mega Man Vs. Me]

This was awesome, you're really good at stop motion, very unique and charming. I really enjoyed this! Only issue was camera quality but thats more of a budget issue, but I still really enjoyed it! Stayed true to the mega man style and feel. Keep up the good work.

spoonfed responds:

Thanks for your kind words!

[Super Mario Logic]

I enjoyed this very much so, the voice acting, visuals and many of the jokes were presented well. But a lot of the jokes here have been done to death by now like the koopa shells one or the Bowser and the axe one, however it was still presented well with your own take on it which I appreciated and even laughed at a couple. The animation was bright and colorful just like a mario game, but you should try and draw characters depending on what angle they're in, for instance the goomba in the beginning had his body facing front but his legs were turned. And try to improve on your line work, try to get it as smooth as you can, takes longer but looks better. Other than that I have no complaints good job and I look forward to seeing more from you in the future! :D

SirSalmonator responds:

Now that is what I call constructive criticism- I am so glad to get advice from people who actually know a lot about animating :D Okay, it is difficult to come up with original jokes, especially since I never know if they have already been done. As for the outlines, I am already drawing with more smooth lines (they are a bit thicker, though). And yes, you are right - I've always been bad at that drawing from different angles '-_- Thanks for the advice, man, I'll work on it!

[Wilfred Owens Poem]

Nice rhymes, very charming. Art was also good, I could see your style in it. However a lot of the parts could've used a bit more work, you used a lot of google images when you needed an object which isn't too bad but you could see the picture wasn't cropped decreasing its quality, learn to crop next time you use google images to put your your animations. The background for the most part was empty and dull. Still good work, keep it up, and try using colors more.

mingylad responds:

Thanks Man
I Understand Where You are coming from 100 %
Thing is I needed to rush this for School
But thanks For Commenting.

[Duckface]

I enjoyed the art style very simple yet clean and served the purpose. But the joke was stale and wasn't executed effectively. More extreame faces could've made it funnier, and instead of a whole duck on her head maybe her head turned into an ugly duck. I don't wanna sound like I'm telling you what to do, and everyone has their own way of doing things. But I felt like this was weak when it could've been better.

Animoumou responds:

Thank you for the critique. This was my first animation so I can use all the advice possible. I'll work on it.

[Lost Track]

I loved the character designs and animation it was all very nicely presented and very appealing to look at. It was funny and had me chuckeling here and their. Very charming and humorous. The voice acting was good but I don't think the voices quite suited the characters, like the big damsel kidnapping bad guy didn't quite have the ruff manly voice I would've expected but rather a lighter less intimidating voice. And the microphone quality wasn't the best. However still very glad I viewed it, again very funny with some great animation.

Brewster responds:

The dissonance between the designs and the voices was intentional, hopefully its not too distracting. Thanks for thanks

[What? Voltorb is evolving]

Did you submit the wrong file, like is this a very early backup because what I'm seeing is an unfinished confusion to the eyes. Everything (except the kid) is grey which I pressume you were trying to recreate the old gameboy feel but everything is the same shade of grey with no depth, shading or even clear fills all the colors are just scribbled on. And the only fleshed out colored in character is the kid who sticks out like a soar thumb due to this and doesn't even move. There's a skeleton of the kid animated in it's key frames which looked good behind the actual character who just sorta stands still. Not doing anything but this single pose. I'll have to admit I got a kick out of the joke, it's a joke everyone has made but the way the voltorb just turned over was amusing and the kids reaction was satisfying. But again it was executed horribly, as it hasn't been executed because what I just saw wasn't an animation but was an animatic (especially with everything labeled) which could result in a decent animation, it's unfinished and I REALLY hope you actually did finish it and just uploaded the wrong file with the kid animated...sorta like what you get in an animation.

LitPower responds:

I'd like to point you to the "Authors comments" section right below the video, I used to be an animator and I quit, and this was an unfinished animation as stated in the description below the video, I just thought I'd upload it regardless since I did work on this for about a couple weeks and thought why not, I apologise it didn't meet your animating standards but I have no intention in finishing this animation as I retired from animation over a year ago, so hope that's cleared things up and try reading the description next time before taking the time to comment lol, have a nice day! :)

[If the FPS where real]

I get the punchline but don't think it was executed very well. The humor just wasn't there for me. The movement was very dodgy and didn't flow well. The audio was awful, get a better microphone! The backgrounds were alright and were well designed. However when their was a close up on the guy's face the background was one boring solid color. Keep at it.

drainzerhg responds:

the audio was a coverting error from the program and the blured background its because i made the back really fast and it look ugly, any way i made it all by myself, but thanks for your review

[Spaceman]

Wow! This is amazing, the whole thing oozes with charm. When the sandwich and drink float in the air it really looked like they were floating in space. Very funny! Keep up the good work, I'd love to see more from you! :D

Bi-Polar-Bear responds:

Thanks Justalp! Really appreciate the positive feedback. There's definitely more like this on the way, you should follow me on Facebook or something :)