Justalp's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Launch]

First off the colors and characters were nice and appealing and while the animation was fine it felt like the character had no weight to him. The sound effects were also lame, you hear those everywhere, try mixing them up. But maybe they were fine but the lack of music made their lameness more prominent. Either way keep at it!

SandBagg responds:

Thanks for the feedback

[Carl Comedy]

Ya know at first glance I thought "eh this is just a lazy looking flash cartoon, but then you had the audacity, the balls, the fucking smugness to put a god damn vine meme in there. That 21 shit infuriated me! FFFFFUUUAAACK!!

GeorgeGardeyAnimatio responds:

while you were ragging on a fifth grader’s animation i was working my ass off and now i have a full ride to NYU and I’m graduating high school early.

[Overwatch Animated 03 Marksmanship]

The backgrounds ruined it for me man, it just seemed really lazy to just copy and paste a screenshot of the game as a background. It woulda been better if you traced over it. That being said I liked the caricatures of the overwatch character in a cute limbless style. The jokes were alright I guuuuueeesss...

KaniniLisk responds:

Yes, I see your point on the backgrounds and it is indeed my beeing lazy on that part to save time. I basically take a screenshot, but it in photoshop and use a filter from the gallery. Because the pictures have so much bright colors the effect isnt that good i guess but i chose to stick with the same filter as i did with my second animation.
I might change this for future animations or at least put more effort in it. Thank you for your feedback

[Fountain of Youth]

Hey this was pretty funny, i usually like your stuff and you did not dissapoint. Funny concept and well produced.

MisterHerbal responds:

Cheers

[Deadpool 60's Cartoon Theme]

good art and animation, voice acting was also good but too much of an echo, look into better mics or recording voices in a less echoy room. keep it up, creative lyrics!

DJprofessahK responds:

Thanks! Most of the echo I added to try and give an old-school feeling, but I don't think I pulled it off to well haha.

[The Illiterate Librarian]

Look here dude I think your cartoons are off great, smooth, nice looking quality and it's funny and all but...maybe it's just me but it ended like one of those vine videos where they play and sad popular song after a #totes-reltable thing happens. Kinda left a bad taste in my mouth. But that being said I am enjoying your content and you should keep up this great quality!

RansomniacNG responds:

Sorry to hear this one didn't hit the mark for you, dude. I don't really have much to do with Vine so I don't know the videos you're referring to, but the song was a big part of the short for me, so I guess it's just a matter of differing senses of humour here, unfortunately.
That being said, thanks so much for the feedback and the kind words. And I appreciate you still giving me a really good rating despite it not quite landing for you. I'm going to get a laugh out of you next time...

[The Many Adventures of Super Baby]

The animation on this was really good! The drawings were done well also but nothing too spectacular. This was also pretty funny with nice humour and timing, uuummm...yeah good everything I suppose. I liked it and I am glad I watched it...umm...keep up the good job...ceul.

RansomniacNG responds:

Thanks, mate! I appreciate the kind words.

[Pokemon's Bitter Reality]

Gosh darn it Pikachu is well spoken. Great cartoon dude!

LinkTCOne responds:

This is very true.

[NWAR: Broken Records]

This was really well written like the other ones of course, the puns were fun at first but did start to run a little dry but the laser pointer joke still made me laugh. The art is also enjoyable and even though its black and white the textures on all the objects give it a nice look i guess, i dunno how to word this i just liked it and keep it up! :D

danmarkowitz responds:

Thank you!

[No-Man Episode3]

I really like your art style and the humour was pretty funny. Although your mic sucks, try editing the audio to get rid of some background noise or something also there are a lot of weird pauses in the cartoon, I feel it could flow smoother if you cut out some uneccesary pauses in dialouge. Keep it up dude your animation and art is great!

SuperPhil64 responds:

Thanks for the kind words!! : ) Il definitely try to improve on my recording skills. I have a snowball mic but my recording environment is less than ideal, i should really get some noise cancellimg equipment.