Justalp's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Identify Mii]

Oh Benjamin you have a lot to learn...about..uhh...your own gender. Great animation, nice fluid motions. Also hilarious and that mom was butch! Keep it up! :D

[Last Day of School lol XD]

This was funny and balls! I liked your colors too and your drawings weren't half bad sport. Voice acting wasn't that good though and that mic pop JEEZ it popped my hears! Keep up the good work though!

[Robert & Kyle Roll Up The Rim To Win!]

The overall animation was sloppy and messy, it had a certain charm to it, and it was mildly entertaining. Some of the jokes weren't really there for me. The backgrounds are all tinted which I don't know if it was stylist, personally not a fan, felt a little disorienting. A lot of improvements needing to be done. Keep at it.

[busser moment - sam]

Uuumm...okey...this is pretty lame. I can forgive the lack of animation if the things they were saying were humorous or interesting...but they weren't, I get humour is different from person to person but their wasn't any build up or punchline, it was just booooooring conversations.

The lack of a background didn't help either. Just a simple background to let us know where they are would've given it some much needed depth. If you don't know what a vcam is, look into it, you don't always need the camera to show all three of them all the time.

At the end, when the two motion tweened to the middle the black guy kept doing a thing with his hand, look how a real person does it and compare. The hand movement should not be that fast nor go on for that long.

Lastly, really long pauses between speeches, try cutting out the fat in audio in audacity or something because ya know...long boring pauses make your animation booooooooooring.

Anyway, your drawings weren't all that bad, just keep working on it and keep at it bro.

chintankwa responds:

Thanks for the feed back, greatly noted.

[The Manlet]

So, I'm guessing you stole sound for the guy who screams and dies from psycicpebbles. Never the less the Manlet was strangely adorable and it was pretty funny.

[Splatoon Problems]

Nice voice acting and animation. Really liked the colour scheme, very similar to the game, the way it transitions. Also SIECK!

[Friendship]

This was cool! The monsters animation was pretty good and his confusion to the hug of the person was pretty funny. Some parts the animation could've been exaggerated to get across the point, like when the person laughs making them bob up and down can get it across better. Sound effects brought it alive but try changing them up a bit, like changing the pitch or slowing it down, to make it sound a bit less stereotypical as those sound effects are pretty popular. Other then that, really charming and I loved the monster animation. Keep it up!

[Hitman He Was]

...This is hypnotically entertaining...groovy...

[Ten AMAAAAZING (sarcasm) Facts!]

Well those were some wacky facts, some were sorta dull or ones that are already a joke, like the black pilot one. Drawings were charming but didn't have much to them, I dunno judging art is weird, too simplistic for me I guess. Some funny ones in there though. Good luck

[Lifted]

Alrighty then, well your getting there. I guess everyone starts from somewhere so there is a lot to improve on. The walk cycle is not fluid, look up some references online, tons of walk cycle ones. The character animation was slow, look up easing if you don't already know what it is and refused to use it, makes classic tweens more life like. The backgrounds were very simplistic but served their purpose. Their was no sound in the whole thing so that made it very boring, some music, sound of wind something, no sound effect when the UFO came either. Which leads me to the story, there was none.
Keep working on it, because what you got so far is pretty good just needs improvement, a lot of it.
Oh shit I should say something good, the drawings were alright, alright then keep at it.