Justalp's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Captain Toad]

First off the animation was super pooper, so props on that. The overall thing was well presented and everything worked well. I guess if I had to nitpick, I could see the Toad scene coming a mile away, when the beginning of the animation was all pleasant and nice. And that jokes been done a couple times before. But when Toad arrives it is just all shades of badass. And the sexy todette (...i approve). Keep up the great work! :D

[Cheesy Death]

I can see these four making a kids TV show...of course including AAALL the death, along with it. Great job! :D

[Niall The Hitman]

Nicely animated and presented. But the drawings looked a little amateur, and you're better then that. Well done though!

[Swear To Me - Volume 1]

I GET IT! ...did I win?? Could've worked better though if you took away that womens voice in the second scene.

[Fall From Grace (Eps 2)]

Whoo! Loved it just as much as the last one. Story's interesting yet entertaining. The animation is also really well done! Great!

ChadTheDJ responds:

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it,

[Kimmy the bully]

I really enjoyed the idea and the beginning made me chuckle. The voices were good but the voice acting was shmeh, whenever the characters was loudly screaming or shouting it took me out the scene cause it sounded like the voice actor was trying to stay quiet for his neighbours or something. Drawings and colors were good as were the poses but movement could be more fluid.

[Sports Nuts]

I LOVE THIS AND I LOVE YOU! The "Bitch go take a shit" song was enough to win me over, I need that as my ringtone. But the overall humor was also superb.

[Christmas Gift]

Great work! The animation was smooth, charming and really nicely done. I loved it! Keep up the great work!

[Tennis with Martin]

Inspiring...I think. This was very charming and your determination was very entertaining to watch. The regular animations of the characters were okay but the animation on them playing tennis was amazing! The movements were very lifelike and the camera movements kept it pumped full of energy. And don't worry, you'll beat him someday, just don't beat him to death before that!

ActiveObjectX responds:

Yeah, when I started the video I wasn't going to animate us playing tennis as intensely. But around midway through animating the video I did some tests where I animated some fluid motions. I thought they looked good so I decided to show us playing more even though this new fluid animation clashed with my original cartoon animation/look.

["Madness"]

YOur art, shading and key frames are good. But there's a lot of dead space in the cartoon and the vcam jumps around a lot and gets disorienting. Try making your vcam movements smoother as well as your characters movements need inbetweens. But keep it up dude, it was funny!

SKillustration responds:

Thanks so much. I'll def keep this in mind for the next one. Vcam is a bit tricky fr me.