Justalp's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Hallowrecked]

Dude this was sweet! Very well animated and very funny! Love your work man, keep it up! :D

[5 Nights at Freddy's]

I LOVE this song. And the animation is really well done, the staticy feel fits really well with the game. And that jump scare at the end scared the ba-jizzles out of me. Great work. Always love to see your guy's stuff! :D

[Watermelon]

Short but sweet! The reaction of Ian was funny, however the background was kinda bland. At first I didn't really get it at first . Make sure you introduce a character before referring to them by name as it wasn't too clear at first. The joke was funny but a little weak. Keep it up! :)

[Putting The Master Sword.]

Amazing! The colors and lights look so lively. The illustrations are so bold. The whole thing feels so epic! Wish it went on for longer. Make more stuff!

Shollis responds:

glad to read comments like this, makes the effort and time invested worthwhile.

[COAT]

Dude this was awesome! Everything was very appealing to look at. The movments of the character were life like and well executed. Very imaginative, the gimmick of the little box which makes stuff bigger when it goes through was really cool. The only thing is it took a little too long to start up, but when it action began it paced up nicely, really getting me into it. Keep up the great work!

[Me Playing : Slender Man]

I liked this, it was charming and funny. The art was cute but the lines were a little sloppy. And the color scheme was a little bland especially the backgrounds so next time try and work a bit more on those. But it was still enjoyable. Keep it up. :)

[Pokemon don't want Pikach]

The lines were very rough and sketched out, it would've helped the look if you went over it to clean it up. The animation was good, nothing that stood out but it served its purpose well. Nice idea, but I had to read the description to actually understand the joke so my advice is try and tell the story to the viewer better, especially with animations that have no speech in them use the animation to explain to the viewer, if you're not sure ask someone to look at it and ask weather they got the premise. The resolution wasn't set right so I could see the white spaces of the frame which was distracting. The art was good and was almost exactly the way the Pokemon look on the show so good job. The sound for Pickachu's call was repetitive for it was used very often the same ones, try to find more samples to avoid this next time. Keep it up. :)

anim8bit responds:

thanks for your feedback! it's very helpeful :)... yea the pikachu call was hard to find without music and that was the clearest version i could find lol wish there was a resource for that kind of stuff!

[Wolverine V The Hulk]

The art was good but inconsistant and I had a strong feeling it was traced. The art style kept changing but it still looked presentable. I didn't find it funny, the jokes were weak and flimsy. The microphone quality was poor, but voice acting was good. The background art was very rushed and poor. However the their were nice colors that made it appealing to look at. The animation was very minimal and choppy. And the title was Wolverine V Hulk not Wolverine sees the Hulk and says fuck this and leaves. However I did enjoy the character design it was charming. Try and improve on these points if you want to. Keep it up.

[Mega Man Vs. Me]

This was awesome, you're really good at stop motion, very unique and charming. I really enjoyed this! Only issue was camera quality but thats more of a budget issue, but I still really enjoyed it! Stayed true to the mega man style and feel. Keep up the good work.

spoonfed responds:

Thanks for your kind words!

[Super Mario Logic]

I enjoyed this very much so, the voice acting, visuals and many of the jokes were presented well. But a lot of the jokes here have been done to death by now like the koopa shells one or the Bowser and the axe one, however it was still presented well with your own take on it which I appreciated and even laughed at a couple. The animation was bright and colorful just like a mario game, but you should try and draw characters depending on what angle they're in, for instance the goomba in the beginning had his body facing front but his legs were turned. And try to improve on your line work, try to get it as smooth as you can, takes longer but looks better. Other than that I have no complaints good job and I look forward to seeing more from you in the future! :D

SirSalmonator responds:

Now that is what I call constructive criticism- I am so glad to get advice from people who actually know a lot about animating :D Okay, it is difficult to come up with original jokes, especially since I never know if they have already been done. As for the outlines, I am already drawing with more smooth lines (they are a bit thicker, though). And yes, you are right - I've always been bad at that drawing from different angles '-_- Thanks for the advice, man, I'll work on it!